[imc-scotland-discussion] new INC on way

[mike92 at riseup.net]

apologies, have just got e mail from fife mike that logic of logo article
is now dropped out, so folk can disregard my comments on that

cheers embra mike








>
> dear all
>
> fife mike has finished the final draft of layout for inc 2, i imagine it
> is far too big to go on the list (4megs) but if anyone would like me to
> send them a pdf as an attachment please let me know, feedback would have
> to be v quick tho as is going off to printers v soon
>
> cheers mike, edinburgh
>
>
>
> just started looking layout, think is v good,
>
> still to go through it properly, but noticed coupla things
>
> to get less text on front page, how about putting mug shot of Councillor
> Maginnes on front page with caption like
> WHY IS THIS WOMAN KNOWN AS BUNTY BACKHANDER?
> see bottom first column inside
>
> then putting the appropriate bit of text there in a box
>
> (btw i preferred the original front page photo, but a lot depends what
> will come out better...)
>
> LOGIC OF LOGO ARTICLE
>
> have read this several times,and i feel that for the inc audience of the
> person on the granton omnibus it is prob not v clear, especially the way
> it ends with what appears to be a ringing endorsement of the sincerity of
> this chief executive!
>
> i suggest it needs something like this at the end, this isnt particularly
> good as am not feeling v inspired! prob needs something a bit less heavy
> handed, but hopefully you get the idea, if space is a problem then i think
> the last sentence of the existing version could be missed out to insert
> something at the end
>
> Unfortunately, despite all the “greenwash”, back in the real world BP and
> all the other corporations are operating “business as usual”, churning out
> profits and carbon emissions as if there's no tomorrow....
>
> cheers embra mike
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