[Imc-uk-features] Animal Rights feature.

[Doug.]

Oops! 'Behaviour' and 'continuance' typos.

Doug.
>
>
>How about this instead?
>
>" Over the last few years, the animal rights movement has been extensively
>vilified in the press, on radio and TV and even by the Prime Minister. The
>general claim is made that the threatening and 'violent' methods chosen
by
>animal rights activists and campaign groups are too extreme. Activists on
>the other hand claim that recent legislation which seeks to criminalize
common
>law behavior leaves them no other option. Furthermore, the continuence of
>State sanctioned animal cruelty and its means of protection have made them
>even more determined to struggle on."
>
>Cheers,
>
>Doug.
>>
>>Hiya,
>>
>>Doug wrote:
>>> The animal rights movement has been extensively vilified in press, radio,TV
>>and
>>> even by Prime Minister Tony Blair. The general claim is made that animal
>>rights
>>> demonstrators use methods which are too extreme. Demonstrators might
argue
>>
>>> though that recent legislation which seeks to criminalise common law
behaviour
>>
>>> leaves them no other option. Also, State sanctioned animal cruelty and
>>its means
>>> of protection are even more extreme.
>>>
>>
>>I'm just wondering about the first bit of this feature. I am not quite
>>sure about the way it's written.
>>
>>How about changing it to something like:
>>
>>" Over the last few years, the animal rights movement has been extensively
>>vilified in the press, on radio and TV and even by the Prime Minister.
The
>>general claim is made that the threatening, direct and 'violent' methods
>>chosen by animal rights activists and campaign groups are too extreme and
>>go beyond the 'acceptable'. Activists on the other hand claim that recent
>>legislation which seeks to criminalize common law behavior leaves them
no
>>other option. Furthermore, the State sanctioned animal cruelty and its
means
>>of protection have made them even more determined to struggle on... "
>>
>>
>>Cheers, Wietse
>>
>>


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