[Imc-uk-features] Animal Rights feature.

[Doug.]

Yes, if you would please.

Thanks,

Doug.
>
>Doug. wrote:
>> How about this instead?
>>
>> " Over the last few years, the animal rights movement has been extensively
>> vilified in the press, on radio and TV and even by the Prime Minister.
>The
>> general claim is made that the threatening and 'violent' methods chosen
>by
>> animal rights activists and campaign groups are too extreme. Activists
>on
>> the other hand claim that recent legislation which seeks to criminalize
>common
>> law behavior leaves them no other option. Furthermore, the continuence
>of
>> State sanctioned animal cruelty and its means of protection have made
them
>> even more determined to struggle on."
>>
>>   
>
>Yeah that's cool. Do you want me to publish it?
>
>Cheers, Wietse
>
>ps. I'll correct typo's...
>
>> Cheers,
>>
>> Doug.
>>   
>>> Hiya,
>>>
>>> Doug wrote:
>>>     
>>>> The animal rights movement has been extensively vilified in press, radio,TV
>>>>       
>>> and 
>>>     
>>>> even by Prime Minister Tony Blair. The general claim is made that animal
>>>>       
>>> rights 
>>>     
>>>> demonstrators use methods which are too extreme. Demonstrators might
>argue
>>>>       
>>>> though that recent legislation which seeks to criminalise common law
>behaviour
>>>>       
>>>> leaves them no other option. Also, State sanctioned animal cruelty and
>>>>       
>>> its means 
>>>     
>>>> of protection are even more extreme.
>>>>   
>>>>       
>>> I'm just wondering about the first bit of this feature. I am not quite
>
>>> sure about the way it's written.
>>>
>>> How about changing it to something like:
>>>
>>> " Over the last few years, the animal rights movement has been extensively
>>> vilified in the press, on radio and TV and even by the Prime Minister.
>The
>>> general claim is made that the threatening, direct and 'violent' methods
>>> chosen by animal rights activistusernamelogistics and campaign groups
>are too extreme and
>>> go beyond the 'acceptable'. Activists on the other hand claim that recent
>>> legislation which seeks to criminalize common law behavior leaves them
>no
>>> other option. Furthermore, the State sanctioned animal cruelty and its
>means
>>> of protection have made them even more determined to struggle on... "
>>>
>>>
>>> Cheers, Wietse
>>>
>>>
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>>
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