[Imc-uk-features] No Borders Gathering Feature

[Marcus Williamson]

On Sun, 05 Mar 2006 13:32:44 +0000, you wrote:

>Heres the text:
>
>NO BORDERS GATHERING: LONDON 11TH/12TH MARCH

Looks good. Couple of typos and suggestions:

"agititation" 
should be: 
"agitation"

"Putting forward a brief description for what the demonstration might consist 
of." 
could be: 
"Putting forward a brief description of the format of the demonstration"

"Anti-IOM" - not clear what the acronym means.

"The experience of being detained (without trial and with no automatic bail 
review), often after experiences of torture and trauma in the countries they 
are fleeing from, pushes many over the edge, and is viewed as a further 
experience of torture at the hands of a country they thought would be a 
refuge." 
could be:  
"The experience of being detained (without trial and with no automatic bail 
review), often after experiences of torture and trauma in the countries they 
are fleeing from, pushes many over the edge. Detainees see this as further 
experience of torture at the hands of a country they thought would be a 
refuge."  

"cenres" 
should be: 
"centres"

"...detention centre has triggered..." 
should be:
"...detention centre have triggered..." 

"...the Home Office from whom their contracts are issued..." 
should be: 
"...the Home Office which issues their contracts..."

"...here our voices..."
should be:
"...hear our voices..." 
 
"...as many groups a possible..."
should be:
"...as many groups as possible..." 
 
Hope this helps.

Thanks
Marcus