[Imc-uk-features] feature proposal: DSEi

[LordRich at riseup.net]

Hi,

I realise this breaks the 24 hour rule, but with DSEi happening *now* I've
just published this.

-- 
Rich


>
> Looks good! Couple of suggestions:
>
> "...on 11th-14th September."
> could be:
> "...during 11th-14th September."
>
> "impendind"
> should be:
> "impending"
>
> "...called protesters to..."
> could be:
> "...called on protesters to..."
>
> "...publishes, most prominently The Lancet, which maintained that
> supporting
> arms fairs was not compatible with medical ethics."
> Could be (to shorten the sentence):
> "...publishes. Most significant of these was The Lancet, which maintained
> that
> supporting arms fairs was not compatible with medical ethics."
>
> HTH!
>
> Thanks
> Marcus
>
> On Sun, 9 Sep 2007 08:49:43 +0100, you wrote:
>
>>Title: DSEi - arms fair ends in violence
>
>
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