[Imc-uk-features] feature proposal: DSEi

[Marcus Williamson]

Looks good! Couple of suggestions:

"...on 11th-14th September."
could be:
"...during 11th-14th September."

"impendind" 
should be: 
"impending"

"...called protesters to..."
could be:
"...called on protesters to..."

"...publishes, most prominently The Lancet, which maintained that supporting
arms fairs was not compatible with medical ethics."
Could be (to shorten the sentence):
"...publishes. Most significant of these was The Lancet, which maintained that
supporting arms fairs was not compatible with medical ethics."

HTH!

Thanks
Marcus

On Sun, 9 Sep 2007 08:49:43 +0100, you wrote:

>Title: DSEi - arms fair ends in violence