[IMC-UK-Features] Feature: Largest Shareholder Barclays and Top Investors Dump HLS

wietse wietse at indymedia.org
Sat May 16 03:36:36 PDT 2009


Hiya,

I don't want to be a pain, but I'd like to propose a couple of changes
to the proposed feature.

I think the abstract should be shortened a little, especially as the
third and fourth paragraph give more background info. At the moment it
seems quite long, especially as the article only links to 3 new newswire
items since the previous related feature. Could we move the 3rd and 4th
paragraphs into the main article body?

Secondly, I have changed the Google links in the article with one from
Scroogle:
http://www.scroogle.org/cgi-bin/nbbw.cgi?Gw=%22barclays%22+site%3Adirectaction.info&n=1

Thirdly, just for being an **** ****, the same image has been used on
numerous previous shac articles/features. Perhaps we can looks for
something new?

Some ideas:

http://publish.indymedia.org.uk/images/2009/02/423119.jpg
http://publish.indymedia.org.uk/images/2009/02/423032.jpg
http://london.indymedia.org.uk/system/photo/2009/03/14/367/5-medium.jpg

Cheers, Wietse





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